This
afternoon I went to a Women Writers in Bloom Poetry Salon, a workshop led by
Peggy Robles-Alvarado. Over a little more than two hours, we read eight poems
and had five- and ten-minute writing exercises after each one. After “From the
Book Titled Nejma” by Nayyirah Waheed, we had the prompt, “who does your body
make a home for?”; here’s my draft for that one:
My bodymakesa home forthe lost ones.My body haltsthe oncoming winds.It cries outforsoft kisses.It brings homethe birds at sunsetMy body lieson the ground ofsand, shiftingwiththe water edgingalong the shore.My body cravestea leaves,orange blossoms tofeedyour insecurities,to healmy insecurities.My body lifts upto the universe,stars specklingthe dark sky.My body makesa home for memoriesit can’t escape,for memories itfeeds on,for memories thatnourish andmemories that starve,memories that haveno end,memories that ride ondirt tracks tonowhere,memories that can’tbe completed,that stop at theedgeof a canyon rim.My body wants a homethat no longer exists.My body builds a newhome fromnails, wine books,words, words, words,letters, numbers.
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participating in the 12th annual Slice of Life Challenge over at Two
Writing Teachers. This is day 1 of the 31-day
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My body seems similar to what you describe in end parts of your poem. I like the rhythm of your poem. I always think poems should be easy, for some reason, maybe because they are shorter or the lines are shorter. I don't know, but the fact is, poetry is never easy for me. Thanks for sharing yours here.
ReplyDeletethank you. Part of this prompt was to think about how the words lie on the page, what the space looks like, which is what led to write such short lines, and even think about what and where punctuation belonged. Poetry is not my natural form, and I have to keep reminding myself that poetry demands images.
DeleteThis is an incredibly poignant slice. It's making me think of all of the things my body holds, wants, and knows.
ReplyDeletethank you!
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